Subject : Something new and short Author : Greg Date : 1/19/2002 10:26:11 PM
Shattering The Shard Breaking what is left, Taking bits down below Single-celled tears, Reducing smithereens Beyond barely there, Shrieking the infinitesimal To something resembling A thin veil of nothing, This would approach My heart’s mass When you responded With a “No,” then followed Rather quickly with a “Never.”

Subject : Something new and short Author : Rose Bud Date : 1/20/2002 1:58:27 AM

Well if it was about me, it would be something old and short, y'know ... ha ha! Breaking what is left, Taking bits down below Single-celled tears, Reducing smithereens Beyond barely there, Shrieking the infinitesimal To something resembling A thin veil of nothing, *even though it would not be perfect english, you might try making that simply 'shrieking infinitesimal' - it would just roll off the tongue better rhythm-wise *a thin veil of nothing is excellent This would approach My heart’s mass When you responded With a “No,” then followed Rather quickly with a “Never.” *that is such a good way to describe it