Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : Jude Date : 7/1/2002 1:27:24 AM |
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My love is blood My love is blood It burbles out in joy Between the cracks on these old hands Like weeds It won't wash off It's pumped and thrums Through callouses and scars My love is blood My joy is breath It pushes out in song Great blowers shove it through tunnels Such greed! It refuses to quiet Breathe in breathe out Through trysts and wars My joy is breath My song is life It storms from me It smashes down upon these keys Beethoven's fingers It won't let go Its endless chords and minors blast Through walls and stars My song is life |
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : JefeDate : 7/1/2002 7:25:53 AM |
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Jude, WOW ! :o Are you a proffesional ? ? Cuz OMG !! |
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : Susanna Date : 7/1/2002 10:09:22 AM |
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That was incredible! I got goosebumps! I loved the metaphors and symbolism. It was great. |
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : Jude Date : 7/1/2002 12:49:39 PM |
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LOL no, im just a mom thanks for you input! jude |
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : AllisonDate : 7/2/2002 4:02:15 PM |
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Wow, that was amazing! You have quite the talent. :) |
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : Jude Date : 7/2/2002 4:49:47 PM |
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Well I submitted it to Pedestal so we will see if they think its talent thanks Jude |
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : cryingheart89 Date : 7/3/2002 3:13:07 AM |
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oh this is a very powerful poem~ |