Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : Jude Date : 7/1/2002 1:27:24 AM
My love is blood

My love is blood
It burbles out in joy
Between the cracks on these old hands
Like weeds
It won't wash off
It's pumped and thrums
Through callouses and scars
My love is blood

My joy is breath
It pushes out in song
Great blowers shove it through tunnels
Such greed!
It refuses to quiet
Breathe in breathe out
Through trysts and wars
My joy is breath

My song is life
It storms from me
It smashes down upon these keys
Beethoven's fingers
It won't let go
Its endless chords and minors blast
Through walls and stars
My song is life
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : JefeDate : 7/1/2002 7:25:53 AM
Jude,

WOW ! :o

Are you a proffesional ? ?

Cuz OMG !!
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : Susanna Date : 7/1/2002 10:09:22 AM
That was incredible! I got goosebumps! I loved the metaphors and symbolism. It was great.
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : Jude Date : 7/1/2002 12:49:39 PM
LOL
no, im just a mom
thanks for you input!

jude
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : AllisonDate : 7/2/2002 4:02:15 PM
Wow, that was amazing! You have quite the talent. :)
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : Jude Date : 7/2/2002 4:49:47 PM
Well I submitted it to Pedestal so we will see if they think its talent
thanks Jude
Subject : My Love Is Blood Author : cryingheart89 Date : 7/3/2002 3:13:07 AM
oh this is a very powerful poem~