Subject : The Moment Author : Frank Cipolletti Date : 6/3/2002 9:14:19 PM

This one is a little provocitive. I cleaned it up a little (for the kids sake) For days I have fantisized this moment Antisipating the sweet passionate scent Imagining my lips upon yours Has sweat slowly rising from my pores Our eyes dance like that of a child The white collum candles glow so mild I stand you up and look you deep in the eyes I softly youch your inner thieghs I reach around and grab you tightly My chest mustles heave as I pull you slightly Closer to me as my senses bloom Two become one alone in this room I begin to kiss softly around your tummy I find the taste of your skin suductively yummy My hands run up the back of your legs As your vagina miostens and shyfully begs My tounge explores your swollon lips I suck them in as I grab your hips You taste so sweet when I penatrate deep You let out a bashful moan from pleasure steep Frank Cipolletti

Subject : The Moment Author : lilboo236 Date : 6/3/2002 10:37:59 PM
I thought that was a little bit nasty but that was tight though you doin your thang

Subject : The Moment Author : Tha Vamp Date : 6/4/2002 10:32:05 AM
Indeed a bit nasty, but I found it very funny. I laughed my ass of, about this tummy-yummy thingy. Frank, can you send me the un-cleaned version? ;-)

Subject : The Moment Author : Fidessa Date : 6/4/2002 1:15:49 PM
Hi Vamp, typical male sense of humor you've got... And isn't nasty a fun word?

Subject : The Moment Author : GeriDate : 6/4/2002 2:48:38 PM
Hey, Frank, Well done. I usually don't respond to this type of peotry, (being the prude that I can be) I like this though, it's softly sensual. Geri

Subject : The Moment Author : frank Date : 6/4/2002 8:43:17 PM
Thanks Geri I wrote it for my wife she liked it too. I'm new to this site so E-Mail me the run down on the site. thans

Subject : The Moment Author : CarlyDate : 6/4/2002 11:08:42 PM

Frank I'm the moderator of the forum - I don't have any strict rules regarding sex, violence or whatever else. I just figure you can guide yourselves - if you think something might offend then don't do it - if you think it's going to be ok - do it. That's your best bet. HERE'S MY opinion of the poem - unless your 'unclean' version is radically different, I don't suppose my opinion would be any different. For days I have fantisized this moment Antisipating the sweet passionate scent Imagining my lips upon yours Has sweat slowly rising from my pores FANTASIZED ANTICIPATING THAT FIRST verse is very sweet - loving. Our eyes dance like that of a child The white collum candles glow so mild COLLUM? A word that I don't know? Is it 'column'? I stand you up and look you deep in the eyes I STAND YOU UP AND LOOK DEEP IN YOUR EYES I softly youch your inner thieghs PUT THAT 'E' BACK - you don't need it in 'thighs' I'LL SHUT up about the youch I reach around and grab you tightly My chest mustles heave as I pull you slightly Closer to me as my senses bloom Two become one alone in this room MUSCLES I begin to kiss softly around your tummy I find the taste of your skin suductively yummy My hands run up the back of your legs As your vagina miostens and shyfully begs SEDUCTIVELY MOISTENS My tounge explores your swollon lips I suck them in as I grab your hips You taste so sweet when I penatrate deep You let out a bashful moan from pleasure steep TONGUE SWOLLEN GOOD POEM, Frank. I'm a bit too young for this kind of thing though - ;-)

Subject : The Moment Author : frankDate : 6/4/2002 11:19:15 PM
O.K. carly as you can see spelling is not mt strong piont. Thank God for spell check. : )

Subject : The Moment Author : NicoleDate : 6/8/2002 3:03:16 PM
Provocative? Yes! Sensuous? Yes! Passionate? Yes! I am a bit of a prude, but I do admit it is beautifully written(despite a few typos). :-)

Subject : The Moment Author : frank Date : 6/10/2002 10:50:31 AM
glad you like it

Subject : The Moment Author : frankDate : 6/22/2002 7:09:05 PM
back too the top

Subject : The Moment Author : CarlyDate : 6/22/2002 7:52:02 PM
Good for you - I do that too - if my poem hasn't had enough comments, I bring it up to the top.