Subject : Let He Who Loves Me Author : Carly Date : 3/13/2002 1:48:14 PM
I have put this little poem up before - wrote it in 95, I think. But today, having rustled some of my old text out, I found the original version I had written - thought I'd share it: Let he who loves me love me as a free soul Let him cherish my heart without bond Should he who loves me go astray then let me give him the Whole Universe in which to fly *****************************

Subject : Let He Who Loves Me Author : Lorraine starkDate : 3/13/2002 3:54:04 PM
Very touching, it reminds me of the saying it is better to have loved and lost then not to have loved at all.

Subject : Let He Who Loves Me Author : GregDate : 3/13/2002 8:50:03 PM
Yeah, like you would be so generous with a fleeing love. The last stanza should read: Should he who loves me go astray I would track and hunt his sorry ass down till my dying day. Ha Ha... I don't feel like being serious today. So there.

Subject : Let He Who Loves Me Author : Beth M Date : 3/13/2002 9:03:24 PM
Carly, can feel passionate raw inspiration. Don't know if that is on target?? Thanks for sharing, Beth

Subject : Let He Who Loves Me Author : Carly Date : 3/13/2002 9:39:30 PM
Greg, you're such a funny one. Actually my poem doesn't work then - because what I'm trying to say is if you want your lover to allow you a free hand - to do what you want - then you must allow your lover the same privilege.